CASE FILE: CANYON CREEK, WYOMING              

Deleted Scene

This is a snippet of a scene that would have followed the first time the hero and heroine made love.   I cut this scene because I didn't think the characters were really ready to be so frank with each other out loud. I thought there would be more tension between them after making love for the first time in such a volatile situation, and a little added tension would also be good for the pace of the story, so I cut the scene. But I think the emotions conveyed are still valid. And I did use a little of his internalization in the scene that replaced this one. Just not the conversation.  


"I don't regret this," Hannah said softly. 

Riley stirred from a half-doze at her words. He slid his hand up the curve of her hip. "Did you expect you would?" 

"I wasn't sure." 

He nuzzled her ear. He hadn't been sure, either. 

"Do you regret it?" She twined her fingers with his. 

"I don't know." He wasn't the kind of guy who dwelled on his emotions. He didn't try to analyze every choice he made. Second-guessing was usually a waste of time. He wanted what he wanted. He took what was offered. That's how it had been for him since Emily's death. 

About a year after her murder, when his self-imposed isolation had begun to make him crazy, he'd gone to Jackson for a weekend, just to be around people who didn't know who he was or what he'd lost. It hadn't been hard to find a woman as uninterested in happily ever after as he had been. Trips to Jackson had become a regular thing for him, once or twice a month. Just to take the edge off. 

But tonight had been the first time since Emily's death that he'd made love to a woman he really cared about. 

He realized Hannah had gone very still. He bent and kissed her shoulder. "I don't regret it," he said, and meant it. 

She lifted his fingers to her lips and kissed each knuckle softly. "I don't do this kind of thing. Not within a week of meeting someone, and not when I know it's going nowhere." He could tell she was trying not to sound as if she needed assurance. 

He gave her none beyond the grazing kiss along the curve of her jaw. Until he caught the killer, his life would continue to be a search for justice--and vengeance. And Hannah would go home to Alabama in a couple of days. 

There was no happily ever after in store for them. 

Copyright © 2009 by Paula Graves

© 2010 Paula Graves